Freedom Planet Hunters - Comic Concept/Cover?

After coming up with a good enough story-concept, for a possible continuation of Freedom Planet's story (in my eyes at least), I decided to give this a shot.
So yeah, this is the concept for a comic.

This could be considered more of an interlude, than an actual sequel.

The story goes like this:
Brevon has been defeated and his main battleship, the Dreadnought, was completely destroyed along with his whole army.
And his remaining forces on Avalice are scattered and broken.

The three kingdoms, Shang Mu, Shang Tu and Shuigang are finally united in peace.
And they formed an alliance, called "Hunters", to cleanse the planet from Brevon's lingering creatures once and for all.

The three heroines of Avalice, Sash Lilac, Carol Tea and Milla Basset got back to living a carefree life.
But while Carol and Milla recovered well from the terrible things that happened to them throughout the conflict with Brevon, Lilac's mental scars can hardly heal, as she is haunted by nightmares nearly every night.
Which constantly bring back those terrible memories and remind her that Brevon is still out there, probably out for revenge.
She soon learned to fear his return and she can only worry about the trials, that the future might hold for them.

Meanwhile a lost Serpentine, who survived the destruction of the Dreadnought, must struggle with the task of regrouping the remnant Brevon forces and finding a way to escape from Avalice.
On his way, he finds a damaged Syntax and soon after, another high-ranking Member of Brevon's army, who recovered from severe injuries and is ready to turn things around.


Yes, I still suck at drawing backgrounds. I know.
In any case, I think I will draw the comic COMPLETELY TRADITIONAL!


I think I will do some practice drawings traditional.
Then write the complete story down, planning it and then getting to it.

I can't say when I will start drawing it.
But I will try to get over my fears of failure and get to it.
I want to prove my skills here. Hope I can make in impact in some way.


But yeah, this is it.
See you later.

Credits:
Sash Lilac, Carol Tea and Milla Basset belong to
Serpentine belongs to (I think...)
The mysterious character to the right of Serpentine belongs to ME!